Point of View Switch

In English class this week, students began reading our “Warrior Quarter” book, The War Horse. The tale is told completely from the point of view of Joey, the horse. After discussing how stories can vary depending on who’s telling it, the boys went to work writing a story from another point of view.

Enjoy “A Walk, To a Dog” by Loucas:

“Walk?”

I heard that great word. The world that inevitably left me jumping in circles with my tail wagging faster than a trucker down the interstate.

“Come on girl, we’re going for a walk, girl!”

When I heard that a second time, I went nuts like a herding dog in a field of disobedient sheep. I knew I was gonna have some crazy fun on this walk.

“Stay girl.”

I followed the command instantly, without hesitation. I felt like letting go of my obedience and acting a fool of myself, but I helped myself … although I did let a few twitches go. He buckled the leash to my choke chain and immediately I let my discipline go and started running circles.

I was finally ready to go. I walked a a slightly faster pace than him so I could assert my dominance over him. I constantly gaped at my surroundings. There were fascinating cars, houses, lawnmowers … It was all so overwhelming.

Without even know it, I ended up back at my home. The outside world slowly closed off to me. My leash was taken off. I laid down on a slightly damp towel that I’ve designated as my bed in a pool of contented exhaustion.

posted by Judy Leslie in Students and have Comments (3)

3 Responses to “Point of View Switch”

  1. Elizabeth Jones says:

    Great job, Loucas! My dog shares this perspective three times a day and it always cracks me up (and inspires me) that a walk in the ‘hood could render such joy and curiousity! As they bumper sticker says, Wag More, Bark Less!

  2. meg and Peter Prodromou says:

    Wow Elizabeth-you walk your dog three times a day!? -now I feel really guilty !
    We were proud to have Loucas’ writing posted, and enjoyed his pespective on a day in the life of a dog-

  3. Beth Black says:

    This is great, Loucas. You had a real artist inside! Not only are you a good guitar player, but , wow, a good writer, too! Nice work.