The English class has been abuzz with creative minds writing a “Contrast Poem.” After reading and dissecting the poem “Commandeered” written by Lucy Gertrude Moberley in 1915, the boys then applied the technique to write a poem about Joey, the horse in our literature study War Horse, who is sent off to World War I.
Below are some of their masterpieces:
Joey in Peace and War
Roosters crowing, first comes morning, shining sun,
Though he once walked, grazing hills, peaceful days,
Always Love.
Now along paths, ever walking, painful days and constant working,
Never sun, always rain, bright flashes, loud noises
Always lonely, never ending.
by Cory
Joey in Peace and War
Before the day, that horrid day
The day that he got sold.
Before that day, he was so kind.
He was as wise as is the old.
Bloody, bloody, is the war.
The damn, infernal war.
Bloody, bloody, he is is today.
While he is at death’s door.
by Patrick
Joey
Through the summer and winter together,
Plowing, cutting, and harvesting
Walking and trotting
One way than the other.
The troops joked and laughed
But the moment we docked
The wounded lay everywhere
I can hear gunfire everywhere.
by Michael
Peace/War
People were cheering as we walked
Flowers were on our uniforms
So many smiles, teary eyes
Hundreds of men were happy, yet sad
The sun was setting, everything was bright.
Blood everywhere, dull faces
Dirty uniforms, guns shooting
Injured men are yelling, old pictures
Tons dead, marching forward
Today is the end of all.
by Jimmy